B1.2 · 31 of 35
Schreiben: Etwas ist schiefgegangen
Lesson · 3 rules · about 5 min
Tell a story that goes wrong, in German, and find out which tense slipped.
- 1The mix that sounds natural
- 2The Plusquamperfekt marks what came first
- 3A story needs a turn
Why this matters
Narrating is harder than reporting, because the tenses have to hold together across a whole text. Write what you had planned, what happened, what you did and how it ended. Aim for 400 to 900 characters. Two things earn the marks: the spoken past mix, which is Präteritum for war, hatte and the modal verbs and Perfekt for everything that happened, and one Plusquamperfekt in the right place, marking the thing that had already happened before the rest.
Rule · 1 of 3
The mix that sounds natural
Written German narration leans on the Präteritum, but in a personal story the natural mix is Präteritum for sein, haben and the modal verbs and Perfekt for the actions. Mixing them that way is not sloppy; it is what a German speaker does.
- Ich war schon am Bahnhof, aber ich hatte die Fahrkarte vergessen. I was already at the station, but I had forgotten the ticket.
- Ich musste zurücklaufen und habe den Zug verpasst. I had to run back and missed the train.
Do not put the actions in the Präteritum too unless you are writing literature: „ich verpasste den Zug“ is correct but reads like a novel.
Quick check
Ich müde, deshalb habe ich lange geschlafen.
Rule · 2 of 3
The Plusquamperfekt marks what came first
When one past event happened before another, the earlier one takes hatte or war plus the participle. It is what makes a story read in order even when you tell it out of order.
- Nachdem ich die Fahrkarte vergessen hatte, musste ich zurücklaufen. After I had forgotten the ticket, I had to run back.
- Der Zug war schon abgefahren, als ich ankam. The train had already left when I arrived.
Quick check
Nachdem wir gegessen , sind wir losgefahren.
Memory trick · 3 of 3
A story needs a turn
Plan, then the turn, then what you did, then the end. The turn is what makes it a story: plötzlich, auf einmal, doch dann. Without it you have written a timetable.
- Eigentlich wollten wir um acht losfahren. Doch dann ging das Auto nicht an. We had actually meant to set off at eight. But then the car would not start.
- Zum Glück hat uns ein Nachbar geholfen. Am Ende sind wir drei Stunden später angekommen. Luckily a neighbour helped us. In the end we arrived three hours later.
Quick check
Which word signals the turn in a story?
Listen
Play it, then pick what you heard.
Spot the mistake
Which one is right?
Spot the mistake
Which one is right?
Spot the mistake
Which one is right?
Spot the mistake
Which one is right?
Cheat sheet
What to take with you
- The mix that sounds natural
- The Plusquamperfekt marks what came first
- A story needs a turn
How to remember it
- Präteritum for war, hatte and the modals; Perfekt for the actions.
- nachdem plus Plusquamperfekt, then Präteritum or Perfekt in the main clause.
- eigentlich sets up the plan, plötzlich breaks it, schließlich ends it.
- A story has a turn; a list does not.
Telling a past story in writing is the narrative task the B1 certificate sets, and the one everyone tells at a dinner table.
Tell the story of a journey on which something went wrong: what you had planned, what happened, what you did about it, and how it ended. Write it as a story, not as a list.
- tell it in the past, mixing Präteritum for war, hatte and the modals with Perfekt for the actions
- use nachdem once with the Plusquamperfekt in the nachdem-clause (Nachdem ich den Zug verpasst hatte, …), or als with the Präteritum (Als ich am Bahnhof ankam, …)
- say what you had planned with eigentlich + wollte (Eigentlich wollte ich …)
- order the story with temporal connectors: zuerst, plötzlich, schließlich
- end with how it turned out and what you thought
0 of 400 characters — keep going 0 words
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Schreiben: Etwas ist schiefgegangen · B1.2
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